From ba3431ad1c48b033c91dbc57e5945fe15486c228 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: John Ogness <john.ogness@linutronix.de>
Date: Mon, 23 Oct 2017 12:39:20 +0200
Subject: update elbe slides

- fix typos
- update platforms
- remove obsolete adk infos
---
 .../elbe-marketing/pres_elbe-marketing.tex         | 40 ++++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

(limited to 'distribution/elbe-marketing/pres_elbe-marketing.tex')

diff --git a/distribution/elbe-marketing/pres_elbe-marketing.tex b/distribution/elbe-marketing/pres_elbe-marketing.tex
index 8c66cb3..c939610 100644
--- a/distribution/elbe-marketing/pres_elbe-marketing.tex
+++ b/distribution/elbe-marketing/pres_elbe-marketing.tex
@@ -32,16 +32,18 @@ Manuel Traut, Linutronix GmbH
 
 The goal of the elbe project is to
 
-make embedded Linux development easier and reproducable
+make embedded Linux development easier and reproducible.
 \end{frame}
 
 \subsection{elbe Target Architectures}
 \begin{frame}
-It currently supports the following Target architectures:
+elbe currently supports the following target architectures:
 \begin{itemize}
-\item x86 (32 and 64 bit)
-\item powerpc
-\item arm and armhf
+\item x86 64-bit (amd64)
+\item x86 32-bit (i386)
+\item arm 32-bit soft float (armel)
+\item arm 32-bit hard float (armhf)
+\item arm 64-bit (arm64)
 \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -49,24 +51,24 @@ It currently supports the following Target architectures:
 \begin{frame}
 \begin{itemize}
 \item use an example XML file and customize it
-\item generate a Buildenvironment
-\item build Debian Binary Package(s) from your own Application
-\item add the custom Packages to the XML file
-\item build the Target Image
+\item generate a build environment
+\item build Debian binary package(s) from your own application
+\item add the custom packages to the XML file
+\item build the target image
 \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
 \subsection{elbe Features / elbe Output}
 \begin{frame}
 \begin{itemize}
-\item Buildenvironment for native development
+\item build environment for native development
 
       inside a qemu virtual machine
-\item ready to use Target Image
+\item ready to use target image
 
 (tar.gz, cpio, UBI, HD/SDcard)
-\item Licence Informations for all used packages
-\item Source and Binary Packages as ISO Image,
+\item licence information for all used packages
+\item source and binary packages as ISO Image,
 
 usable for regeneration builds
 \end{itemize}
@@ -75,10 +77,10 @@ usable for regeneration builds
 \subsection{elbe Features}
 \begin{frame}
 \begin{itemize}
-\item different modes for Target Image generation
+\item different modes for target image generation
 \item finetuning rules in XML
 \item archive.tar.bz2 for config files embedded in XML
-\item Update checker
+\item update checker
 \item Emdebian (grip) Packages can be used
 \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
@@ -96,10 +98,10 @@ usable for regeneration builds
 \begin{frame}
 \begin{itemize}
 \item focus on your application
-\item reuse the power of Debian, don't build everything again
-\item reproduce your Target Image even in 10 years ore more
-\item it's possible to build full featured Debian Images
-\item and optimized Images without dpkg/apt functionality
+\item reuse the power of Debian, do not build everything again
+\item reproduce your target image even in 10 years or more
+\item it is possible to build full featured Debian images
+\item ... and optimized images without dpkg/apt functionality
 \end{itemize}
 \end{frame}
 
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